tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post7908211475662936051..comments2023-08-20T14:34:20.726-07:00Comments on Where it began: Santa Got LostSquid McFinniganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-22774468195814022742018-12-10T16:39:51.677-08:002018-12-10T16:39:51.677-08:00So cute, sounds like something Cash would say, lov...So cute, sounds like something Cash would say, loved it Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03863463547516453576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-31162613139551708622013-12-06T04:13:06.103-08:002013-12-06T04:13:06.103-08:00Good story, Squid. Good story, Squid. Glendon Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485193964618736413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-42130441082287822622013-09-29T12:08:58.998-07:002013-09-29T12:08:58.998-07:00Thanks so much, you will have to tell me your firs...Thanks so much, you will have to tell me your first name, I can't call you A all the time.Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-80570977691383369442013-09-24T21:31:00.828-07:002013-09-24T21:31:00.828-07:00Great tale Squid! Love Santa and Christmas stories...Great tale Squid! Love Santa and Christmas stories! Enjoyed it lots!ajwrites57https://www.blogger.com/profile/11336457490614262094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-47869761656521031492013-09-05T07:26:08.714-07:002013-09-05T07:26:08.714-07:00Thanks David. I am finding it difficult with punct...Thanks David. I am finding it difficult with punctuation during dialog so trying to get better.Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-43651577125433934502013-09-05T03:25:35.798-07:002013-09-05T03:25:35.798-07:00One or two errors, but nonetheless it's a nice...One or two errors, but nonetheless it's a nice story.<br /><br />Good luck with the competition.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-7095555827053392552013-09-04T12:50:57.325-07:002013-09-04T12:50:57.325-07:00Hi, loved the story, but I agree with Judith Anne ...Hi, loved the story, but I agree with Judith Anne that some proofreading might've been better. I'm not an editor, but I saw some spelling errors in your story right away. I really liked the punchline of your story.Astridhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10381016727248405767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-62590668070359876072013-09-04T08:06:54.872-07:002013-09-04T08:06:54.872-07:00LOL thanks so much L. I am sure you will win and i...LOL thanks so much L. I am sure you will win and if not you it wont be me. I just entered to see if I could produce a story on request. I was happy enough with it but did not know if I got the feeling in my head across properly. <br /><br />Did you post your story anywhere else so we can have a read or are you keeping it for yourself? I would love to read your one.Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-11584818512595513732013-09-04T08:04:14.085-07:002013-09-04T08:04:14.085-07:00Thanks Linda, that is a great comfort. I always st...Thanks Linda, that is a great comfort. I always struggle with Grammar and even spelling. I have to re read things over and over again. I am never sure if I have put a comma or full stop where they should go. In the end I try and read it like someone else and see if it seems "Lumpy".<br /><br />To me your opinion is all that counts. Seeing the competition just gave me the idea for the story, I just wanted to see if I could write on demand. Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought it means a lot. :)<br />Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-47892834084114312312013-09-04T06:51:20.468-07:002013-09-04T06:51:20.468-07:00Good story with a twist at the end. I have also en...Good story with a twist at the end. I have also entered the competition, so may the best 'man' win!Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03928188713843255078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-50496894601785487532013-09-04T00:00:21.863-07:002013-09-04T00:00:21.863-07:00As a nazi of the English language (don't do ty...As a nazi of the English language (don't do typos or poor grammar) I thought it read perfectly. It flowed well and had me hooked in and then ended well too. I think your grasp of the English language and grammar is 99% and I would give a very high mark for content and pace as well. Just my opinion though. AdaMaryC Christiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09462022349522832995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-37374230300507714892013-09-03T18:48:50.341-07:002013-09-03T18:48:50.341-07:00Thanks for that Judith. Any particularly big mista...Thanks for that Judith. Any particularly big mistakes that I missed? Sorry to say only myself here to look at what I have done and sometimes I read what should be there instead of what is there.Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-34285322708662649002013-09-03T18:39:53.281-07:002013-09-03T18:39:53.281-07:00This is a cute story, and I enjoyed reading it ver...This is a cute story, and I enjoyed reading it very much. However, I think it could have used a second set of eyes before being submitted. And, yes, I am an editor.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13536419679274354837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-42009311944884082112013-09-03T18:26:33.836-07:002013-09-03T18:26:33.836-07:00Tranny day:)Tranny day:)Squid McFinniganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06926586719344515002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2837185177880423699.post-54044239002422606322013-09-03T17:55:55.570-07:002013-09-03T17:55:55.570-07:00Cute!!! D'uh, Mom!!!!Cute!!! D'uh, Mom!!!!Catterfly Musingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11692876745583673355noreply@blogger.com