Last
Christmas, we decided to spend the holidays with my husband’s parents. My
little boy, Sam, sometimes gets funny ideas into his head and on the drive over
he was unnaturally quiet. After a half hour, my husband looked back and saw a
very sad looking little boy in the booster seat.
“You
okay back there, Sammy?” asked Tim.
“How
will Santa know we're not at home Daddy?” he asked, seriously.
“Santa’s
magic, he knows these things,” said Tim, smiling.
“Like
Harry Potter?” asked Sam.
“Yes,
only better,” said Tim.
I watched as Sam frowned, thinking, but he didn't say any more on the subject.
Soon he was playing his Gameboy, lost in a world of his own.
When we arrived, Tim’s dad was waiting for us.
“Grandpa,”
shouted Sam, as he rushed up the porch steps. Tim’s father swept him
up in his strong arms and twirled him around. The house glittered with fairy
lights and our breath fogged the chilled evening air. Now it felt like Christmas.
For
the next few days we ate till we burst, watched old movies in the middle
of the day, and went for walks in the woods. In a blink of an eye, Christmas
Eve was on us and Sam was so excited, he trembled.
“Dad,
are you sure Santa will be able to find us?” he asked.
“I
promise, Sam. Santa knows where every kid in the world is tonight."
“OK
Dad,” Sam said, trusting Tim implicitly.
Around eight, I managed to get Sam into his PJ’s, and get his teeth brushed. We
put out a glass of milk and a ham sandwich for Santa, and a bowl of apples for
his reindeer. Only when all that was done to Sam's satisfaction would he
agree to go to bed.
“I
won’t be able to sleep, Mom, I just know it. Santa will fly right past the
house,” Sam said, when I tucked the duvet under his wobbling chin. I could see
the tears forming in the corner of his eyes.
“What
if I stay with you and read a story?” I asked.
He nodded and scooted over in the bed. I got under the covers and read
from Thomas the tank until he was sleeping soundly and making
little boy snores. Later that night, Tim and his Dad went out for a beer
while I sat in with Tim’s Mom, watching A wonderful life. Just
after eleven, the sitting room door opened. Sam stood there with huge tears
running down his chubby cheeks.
“Santa
didn't find us MOM!" he wailed, pointing to the empty space under the
tree in the hall.
“Oh
Sam,” said Tim’s Mom, taking him up on her lap “It’s
not Christmas yet. See the little hand is not at the twelve
yet," she said pointing at the clock over the fireplace. Sam rubbed his
eyes and looked at the clock, his little brain taking in this new fact.
“You
woke up too early, sweetheart," she said, rocking Sam in her
arms. "Let me tuck you back in bed for a few more hours. I'm sure
Santa is on his way."
“OK,”
he said slowly, and she carried him back to the bedroom. I heard him ask,
“Grandma, are you sure he didn't get lost? It's a long way from our house to
your house?”
“I’m
sure, sweetheart. You know, Santa has been coming to me for nearly seventy
years and he never once got lost, even when I was somewhere else on Christmas night.”
Later, when Tim got home, I told him how upset Sam had been when he found no
presents under the tree. Tim looked a little hurt but said it would be fine in
the morning.
Once
the house grew quiet, and the beds were filled with sleepy people, I heard the
branches of the Christmas tree whisper. I knew the floor was now piled
high with gaily wrapped toys, the milk would have vanished, and all the apples
would have big bites taken out of them. Santa had been.
In the morning, Sam landed on the bed like an un-exploded cannon
ball.
“MOM! DAD! He came, look,” Sam said, excitedly pushing a huge red truck in my
face.
“It’s
lovely Sammy,” I said, still feeling groggy, but happy in the haze of his
enthusiasm. “We told you Santa was magic.”
“No
one's magic, Mom,” he scolded me.
“Well
how did he find you so, Mr Smarty Pants?” I teased him, tickling his belly.
“He
used the, Find Sam App on his
iPhone,” said Sam, between gales of laughter.
“Has
Santa got an iPhone?” I asked.
“Mom,
EVERYONE has an iPhone!” Sam said, running off to open more of his presents.
Cute!!! D'uh, Mom!!!!
ReplyDeleteTranny day:)
ReplyDeleteThis is a cute story, and I enjoyed reading it very much. However, I think it could have used a second set of eyes before being submitted. And, yes, I am an editor.
ReplyDeleteThanks for that Judith. Any particularly big mistakes that I missed? Sorry to say only myself here to look at what I have done and sometimes I read what should be there instead of what is there.
DeleteAs a nazi of the English language (don't do typos or poor grammar) I thought it read perfectly. It flowed well and had me hooked in and then ended well too. I think your grasp of the English language and grammar is 99% and I would give a very high mark for content and pace as well. Just my opinion though.
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda, that is a great comfort. I always struggle with Grammar and even spelling. I have to re read things over and over again. I am never sure if I have put a comma or full stop where they should go. In the end I try and read it like someone else and see if it seems "Lumpy".
DeleteTo me your opinion is all that counts. Seeing the competition just gave me the idea for the story, I just wanted to see if I could write on demand. Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought it means a lot. :)
Good story with a twist at the end. I have also entered the competition, so may the best 'man' win!
ReplyDeleteLOL thanks so much L. I am sure you will win and if not you it wont be me. I just entered to see if I could produce a story on request. I was happy enough with it but did not know if I got the feeling in my head across properly.
ReplyDeleteDid you post your story anywhere else so we can have a read or are you keeping it for yourself? I would love to read your one.
Hi, loved the story, but I agree with Judith Anne that some proofreading might've been better. I'm not an editor, but I saw some spelling errors in your story right away. I really liked the punchline of your story.
ReplyDeleteOne or two errors, but nonetheless it's a nice story.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the competition.
Thanks David. I am finding it difficult with punctuation during dialog so trying to get better.
ReplyDeleteGreat tale Squid! Love Santa and Christmas stories! Enjoyed it lots!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, you will have to tell me your first name, I can't call you A all the time.
DeleteGood story, Squid.
ReplyDeleteSo cute, sounds like something Cash would say, loved it
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